Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Rich , Poor to A Lucky Man

There one was a kind and rich man in the village . He always help poor people until they had enough money to buy a mini house to stay . They said to the rich man " Pak Tolong , you've help us so much . When you are in trouble , we will help you . The rich man's name was Pak Tolong that is why he like to help .

The pooerpeople help Pak Tolong when he was in trouble . All the villagers like Pak Tolong . One unlucky day , Pak Tolong went bankrap ( manglish ...) He had to sell his house to other people so he took out some things from his house . His bank was only 200 dolars but in his piggy bank was at least 1,000 . He took all the money from his house and bank .

So Pak Tolong started finding a place . He soon found a place that is on the pavement of the road . Eventhough he is poor , he was happy that he can be still alive till this day now . Because he is in his 70's that is 75 years old . Suddenly , some people pass by and they some money to Pak Tolong and the people is who Pak Tolong helped ...

The next morningat about 8 a.m. , Pak Tolong woke up . When he went out , he was shocked to see a big lory in front of him . He said to the driver " Why did you bring this lorry here ? " . The driver answered " I came here with this lorry to help you put your things in the lorry because your best friend of Encik Kamal Jon wanted you to stay with him . " Ok then . "

At 10 a.m , they reach Encik Kamal's house . And then , Encik Kamal came out and said to Pak Tolong " Sorry , because you must stay outside in the garden . But better right ? " Of courselah better . " Pak Tolong answered . ( okay ....this part kinda don't make sense ...hehe ..)

DO GOOD , REWARD BEST

( is the story okay ??? Ya , there are a lot of grammar mistakes ... cause i wrote it when i was young ...anyway , i hope you enjoyed it =)

This story was made : 2005 , 10 years old

...kat...

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